Sunday, March 16, 2014

The Cartoonist !

I’m Vignesh Manikandan, a not very tall, with black hair and enthusiastic brown eye. I walked down the Parkmont school hallways in blue and orange striped shirt and light blue denim jeans. I started at the campus blankly because nothing exciting or adventurous happened yet in my life.

I heard loud stomping feet coming down the hall. Nate, the leader of a evil gang that was formed four years ago. His hair was brown and he was wearing a Mohawk. He had brown eyes, and literally one can see the blazing fire in his eyes at night. He was wearing brown baggy pants that reached to the tip of the heels of his shoes. He was wearing dark shirt with a picture of a terrifying skull in the center. He sent chills down my spine.

He smirked at me and pushed me aside. I fell down on the on the floor with a THUD! Revenge was in my eyes. As I was about to get backup and fight him his evil gang was gone from my sight. I got up, dusted myself and headed to my fourth grade class.

After school my friend Prifik came over to my home, he is one of my best friends in the universe. While we were playing our battle of Beyblades, he said, “you know, you are good at cartoons, so you should submit your entry in our schools annual cartoon drawing contest, and he encouraged me that I would win a prize for sure, hence I decided to enter the contest.

The very next day in school, I was signing a paper to enter the competition. The deadline was in a week’s time and I had just the right amount of time to work on it. The bulletin board on the MPR room displayed all the entries received so far as I was going through the participant list, my eyes stopped right at the name “Nate”. But that did not stop me, I told to myself that I was going to win this competition…

I worked on my drawing over days and nights. I wouldn’t stop until I got the character in a perfect shape. It was most challenging to draw an image of heroic lightning dragon that I had in my mind. I spent several hours in getting the exact expression and colors to the character.

Before I knew it, it was the day to submit our cartoons. I saw Nate turning in his submission. He had a drawing of a garden snake, which was presented bit poorly in my thoughts. Once I walked out, I could not stop hearing him bragging about how he would win and he had the coolest drawing of all the submissions. I just ignored him and turned in my submission after him.

The chairperson who was collecting the cartoons looked at my submission and his eyes went wide. The dragon was splashed with blue and orange color on the scales, and its razor sharp talons jutted out of its piercing wings. The dragon’s head was drawn to the right with red flames shooting out of his mouth.

Finally the day of the results came and I could not wait until my classes were over so I can go to the MPR room to hear the results. When I entered the MPR room, I noticed ten rows of drawings displayed on tables, each row had ten drawings in display. When we all settled down, the chairperson announced the results from the third place till first place in each grade level. I felt happy that my buddy in kindergarten won the first place for grade levels K till three. Then they announced the results for grade four till six, the third place winner was from sixth grade, second place winner was from fifth grade. Finally the first place winner was called out… I could not believe my ears as he said “Vignesh Manikandan” …

When I came up on the stage wearing my best smile ever I can see that Jacob was pretty sad. My mom, dad and sister clapped louder for my achievement and I can see my friend Prifik went crazy with happiness. He ran up the stage and hugged me, and shouted meet “Our Cartoonist” of the year, and that is how I got my revenge and the name “The Cartoonist”.


Submitted this for Young Author Contest - Parkmont Elementary school, 4th grade.

GOAL

It was 8:00 PM in the Grubsmash high school stadium in Fremont, CA, Fans were lined up in the bleachers, and they all focused on one thing below, which was the soccer ball. The Platinum Monkeys the home team had Silver Shirts and their rival team Mad Rhinos had red shirts. As this was happening in the home stadium of Platinum Monkeys most of the fans were cheering for them.

At one point, the scores were tied up, both the Platinum Monkeys and the Mad Rhinos were have scored 28 points, and on the clock there was only 5 minutes left. The player #9 from Rhino team passed the ball to the player #8 but the player #6 from Monkeys intercepted it, and they herded the ball and went in the opposite direction, and it was intercepted again by Rhinos and taken in the other direction. Almost all the plays followed this way and there was only final 15 seconds left in the game.

The Monkeys took a timeout and planned out a strategy and were back in the game very quick, and their strategy started working out. The player #7 of Monkeys got the ball passed by his team mate and he was ready to kick while the Rhino's goalie positioned himself to defend it. There was just 2 seconds left in the clock, and the crowd gasped! Now player #7 from Monkeys kicked the ball and it just zoomed past the goalie, GOAL !